ImpressionisticPatches of sombre grey cloudsFlirting with the heat
yellow explosion –bees buzz aroundpumpkins growing
Ducks fly sidewaysstick men purple horses fridge art treasures
people in the airsquealing ‘Aargh!’sky diving
checking fenceswheels spinningbogged
kookaburras laughchortle, chuckle, ha ha halife is such a joke
sunrise & sunsetsky hangs out its brightestcolours
lovely images Jill! You certainly got me thinking there!I've thought of another haiku rule, by the way chaps - haiku should be in present tense - this emphasises the 'moment in time' nature of haiku poetry. So, no verbs ending in 'ing'
cat sits on fencedog barks -and barks
morning cloudsshadow each otheronly the sun moves
boxing-glove headspunch skylorikeets rush
Green foam oceanwaves her white-tipped glovesat the receding shoreline
Yikes!where did time fly?12:12AM(Ooops! Best do two today.)
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Impressionistic
Patches of sombre grey clouds
Flirting with the heat
yellow explosion –
bees buzz around
pumpkins growing
Ducks fly sideways
stick men purple horses
fridge art treasures
people in the air
squealing ‘Aargh!’
sky diving
checking fences
wheels spinning
bogged
kookaburras laugh
chortle, chuckle, ha ha ha
life is such a joke
sunrise & sunset
sky hangs out its brightest
colours
lovely images Jill! You certainly got me thinking there!
I've thought of another haiku rule, by the way chaps - haiku should be in present tense - this emphasises the 'moment in time' nature of haiku poetry. So, no verbs ending in 'ing'
cat sits on fence
dog barks -
and barks
morning clouds
shadow each other
only the sun moves
boxing-glove heads
punch sky
lorikeets rush
Green foam ocean
waves her white-tipped gloves
at the receding shoreline
Yikes!
where did time fly?
12:12AM
(Ooops! Best do two today.)
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